- Oct 6, 2015
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(( I lose more and more faith everyday... SAN News should be closed or John Strickland/Lend Howard should lead it. Unique ideas aren't always the best ideas (i.e. this "article"). Try reporting newsworthy stuff — robberies, terrorism, riots, anything. Only thing I can give you some credit on is that TV-like thing you were doing, which even though it really isn't news it is a interesting idea, but that's about it. Your spelling and grammar are above average (for Lawless standards), I'll give you that, but they're still really not sufficient enough to lead a faction that requires nearly 100% perfect grammar and spelling (but as this is the smallest issue, it could slide since it is good enough especially since no one else wants to lead SAN News). Not to mention the fact that you powergame over news reports ("*bites lip*" for example even though IT'S NOT VISIBLE THROUGH RADIOS), which is a much bigger flaw considering this faction is also the only faction which requires the highest level of role-play to run efficiently. You should really proofread your articles before posting, to prevent stupid stuff like "Network Direction" being posted, which I would say is one of the biggest problems with SAN News under your leadership. If you want to have a good SAN News faction, you should:
• Stop posting dumb stuff like this article, report REAL news (robberies, terrorism, anything other than what you're currently doing — this isn't a reality TV show it's a news agency — biggest issue by far)
• Try not powergaming as much (like the RP movements/interactions like "*bites lip*" — second biggest issue)
• Proofread your articles before posting them (twice would be ideal — third biggest issue)
• Try improving your spelling and grammar (although grammar seems to be a much bigger issue — this is probably the smallest issue to be honest, your spelling is good enough as is your grammar but you should always strive for perfection)
Also:
IT IS SAN NEWS NOT SANEWS.
http://gta.wikia.com/wiki/SAN_News
Just my 2¢, though I do think you'd stop getting so much hate if you did improve those areas that I mentioned. ))
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